Well that was... unexpected.
Even better than the original! I really love all the hidden gags and your toonifying of the characters is really uber spiff. :D
OMG this animation is so awesome! That's the reason I've watched.. no... STUDIED all the entries over 25+ times. They are all now permanently burned into my retinas and infecting my subconscious so that now each and every one of those animators have assimilated to become a part of me. Yes. YESSSSSS! It was delicious.
I laughed. I cried. I ate some lasagna.
Something about this seems... Familiar.... :D GL Salty Peach!
You do have talent, but some things to work on. To keep your audience interested you need to keep introducing new things into your work, not the same loop. Starting with the guitar playing then the guys hand still playing while glugging down the beer was funny... however that part dragged on a bit too long. Timing is key, I'd have done that, had him grab the beer and maybe pushed it three seconds, five tops. The charachters had identical bodies. It's a quicker way to get it done, but the audience sees what you did right away. Taking the time to draw up another body makes it look more professional. I'd say the same for changing the charachters' facial expressions as well. A lot of the animation was the guitarits hand flipping back and fourth BUT THERE WERE a few good parts where we saw some actual finger movement, stay with the latter, that brought the quality up a notch. Not much happened in the background. If you need inspiration, look at music videos... I've watched Gorrillaz for inspiration on timing and gags for my own animation skill, if you like them at all they keep it interesting and play music. That's my advice, I hope it helps some.
ONE OF FEW GOOD SPRITE ANIMATIONS
This would be the first sprite animation that I have EVER liked. Great humor, great job. I really liked your flash.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Really Bad graphics...
The graphics are terrible... If you can't afford Photoshop, then Download Gimp Shop... it's free and just as good... that for one would help.... or you could just draw it in flash... Lotsa practice and you can get better.
Pretty good for a stickman movie
You did your own art, and the animation is rather smooth. The stickman movies are overdone a bit, but atleast you aren't using the overdone burnt out gamesprites that just fight and have no storyline...
That was very odd.... What was up with their voices? It was like listening to a play by the sims.... Graphics need work, as does plot, but pretty good for a beginner.
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